Monday, January 19, 2009

A Successful Student

Everyone likes to be succeeeful. And there are many steps to be a successsful student. For choosing a best way to study is very hard. Today, I want to give some advice to every body in my class to share my experrience. First at all, you have to go to school every day and pay attention to the teacher. Wherever you decide to start reading, take notes. Whenever you see a new word, you are always open the dictionary to find the meaning. Make sure you are understand what are you reading !!!
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  1. pirata333January 24, 2009 at 9:33 PM

    CONTENT
    It is a good topic. Clear to understand.

    COHESIVENESS
    Easy to read. Maybe next time you'll write more information.

    GRAMMAR
    You should write first of all, instead of first at all. The correct word is experience. It isn't clear what you wrote, next last sentence, you are always open... And in the last sentence, you should write, make sure
    you are understanding...

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  2. monkey4cecJanuary 28, 2009 at 10:10 PM

    Dear Pirata,

    Thank you very much for commenting on this post. There are some mistakes, but I don’t care. I don’t care because I think that the contents and the cohesiveness of your comments were quite good, and your grammar and vocabulary mistakes are quite minor.

    Thanx,
    Dan

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